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Post by Tanglestar on Mar 15, 2010 6:12:20 GMT -5
Ravenpaw limped into the ShadowClan camp. Gasps rose in the air like a frightened crow. He was gasping for breath, and couldn't speak at all. He flopped on the ground and closed his eyes. He saw the black tom again. What do you want?! He answered, You. Ravenpaw gave up, and rested right in the middle of camp.
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Post by Rainstar on Mar 15, 2010 6:16:16 GMT -5
Whitefeather dropped her prey that she has just sat down to eat, "Ravenpaw!" excitment came over her. She felt as though her heart was going to burst! She looked at his scrony body, It looks like he hasnt eaten. She looked down and grabbed a fat rabbit from the pile and rushed over. She layed it at his feet and sat down and looked at his matted pelt. "You eat, im going to get Wildstar." she padded away looking back to see if the apprentice took his first bit yet.
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Post by Snowberry on Mar 15, 2010 11:26:27 GMT -5
Wildstar sat in his den, licking his wounds trying to make them better when he hear the nosie outside of the den. He turned his head trying to make better sound of it. He shooked his head, He could hear cats saying Ravenpaw over and over again. That couldn't be right. Ravenpaw was dead. He walks with StarClan now...
Grasspaw pushed her way out of the den to see the limp body of Ravenpaw.
"Great StarClan! He's alive!" She cried raceing over to him.
He looked in bad shape, his black pelt was cold and smelly and it looked like he swallowed alot of water. Quickly Grasspaw raced back to the Den and took a buch of Yarrow. Then ran back to him. Then she meowed to him, "Here Ravenpaw. This will make you sick but will get rid of most the water in side of you." Knowing that he couldn't talk she gaved him it and placed it in his mouth waiting for him to throw up.
occ: Ew...
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Post by Tanglestar on Mar 15, 2010 19:19:44 GMT -5
He tried to open his eyes, and he could enough to see Whitefeather looming over him. "W-White.." His head fell back again in the attempt.
"Grasspaw," He muttered and then swallowed. "Save it for the cats who need it." He gave a little sputter. "I'll be fine."
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Post by Snowberry on Mar 16, 2010 9:44:46 GMT -5
Grasspaw rolled her eyes at him. "Shut up, Ravenpaw. Let me do my job." She meowed as she looked at his pelt. There were some cuts here and there. She placed some herbs on them and looked back at Ravenpaw.
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Post by Tanglestar on Mar 16, 2010 17:44:01 GMT -5
Sighing, Ravenpaw half way stood, legs shaking, and lapped up the odd tasting herb. A nasty taste filled his stomach and throat. He spat up the yarrow, along with tons of water. Nose scrunched up, he took a bite of the rabbit Whitefeather brought him, and chewed as he could. He felt weaker now, and he lay back down. "w-Wheres Wildstar..." He muttered.
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Post by Rainstar on Mar 16, 2010 19:51:53 GMT -5
Whitefeather came padding back seeing Ravenpaw dig into the rabbit, "Im glad to see you eating!" she sat down beside him and started to lick his fur. she quinched her face at the bitter taste. "Ew! yuck! were have you been! this taste like fox dung!" She shook her head then stated to groom her apprentice and tryed to get some heat back into his body.
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Post by Tanglestar on Mar 17, 2010 18:08:38 GMT -5
Ravenpaw tried to purr. A rasp slightly came from his body. It was all dizzy around him, every thing was swirling. His muscles were so sore from the travel, and fighting the current in the water. He lay his head onto the ground, and a wave of sleep crashed over him into blackness. Ravenpaw sat up straight. A slightly familiar scent rose around him. He felt powerful once again. the area around him was a completely black area. No other cat was around, but he still scented the cat. Stealthily, he wondered from his spot. Endless darkness surrounded him. Suddenly, a pair of evil amber eyes locked gazes with him. startled, Ravenpaw took a step back. The eyes laughed an evil sounding laugh, and the figure stepped into the open. It was a muscular black tom. Ravenpaw reconized the cat that had been visiting him recently. He narrowed his eyes. "What do you want?" He hissed. The other cat laughed once more. "I've already said it. I want you." An image of three more cats appeared in the area. It was only an image, but Ravenpaw could see them moving along in their clans. One was from RiverClan, one from Windclan, and one from Thunderclan. All of them looked somewhat like him and the tom as well. His thoughts were cut off by the grumbling voice of the tom. "I will be visiting these cats tonight as well, just as I have visited you." Ravenpaw snapped; "What do we all have in common, that makes you want to visit us??" The tom looked up at him. "I'm their father."
With a gasp, Ravenpaw fled. He turned tail and skidded through the darkness. Looking over his shoulder, the pair of amber eyes were still watching his every move.occ: oooooooohh  |
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Post by Snowberry on Mar 18, 2010 8:53:07 GMT -5
Wildstar got up and went to see what was going on. No body had came to talk to him and now he could hear more and more cats outside. He stepped out into the bright sun and looked down on his clan. There on the ground was one cat he thought he'll never see again.
Quickly he made his way down and looked at Ravenpaw.
"Ravenpaw? It is you, insn't it?" He aske as he went forward and sniffed the apprentice. It was him. "How?"
Grasspaw looked up at the medicine den as Wildstar spoke. Where was Wildclaw? She needed him! How was she sure she was doing it right?!
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Post by Tanglestar on Mar 18, 2010 11:36:36 GMT -5
Ravenpaw flinched, his eyes flew open. His leader, of all cats was looming over him. He felt a little more refreshed, so he spoke. "Wil- Wildstar?" He sputtered. His head pounded at all the noise circling around him.
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Post by Snowberry on Mar 19, 2010 9:29:01 GMT -5
"Back off everybody! Give him some space!" Grasspaw meowed pushingsome of the cats back. "Will someone be useful and find Wildclaw for me, please?" She asked the crowd as Wildstar went closer to Ravenpaw.
"It's me alright. Listen, Ravenpaw I'm sorry for what happened." He meowed looking at Ravenpaw.
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Post by Tanglestar on Mar 19, 2010 21:50:40 GMT -5
Ravenpaw tried to smile, eyes half open. "Don't be sorry Wildstar. I did it for my clan." His voice cracked a little. "It's good t see everyone's faces again." He added in a mumble.
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Post by Snowberry on Mar 20, 2010 10:03:27 GMT -5
"I know. Your a very brave apprentice." Wildstar meowed. "Once your better we'll make you a warrior."
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Post by Tanglestar on Mar 20, 2010 10:17:03 GMT -5
Ravenpaws ears perked up. "I will defend this clan, with my life!" He huffed as he shoved himself to his paws. Still a little wary, he bowed to Wildstar and limped to the apprentices den, where he found an extra lined nest with dove feathers and all, and curled up to sleep.
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Post by Rainstar on Mar 20, 2010 21:22:52 GMT -5
Whitefeather was still worried as she padded up to Wildstar. "Hes not ready to become a warrior. Well im mean physicely cause hes still weak."
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