Post by Tanglestar on Nov 18, 2009 17:12:03 GMT -5
Whisperpaw cried from the tree: "No!" As Tanglestar was flung by the badger, crashing into a tree. "no..." She felt a cold tear slowly make it's way down her cheek, and dripped off out of the tall tree she was in. She closed her sparkling eyes and held back anymore tears. She did not want Snowberry, Blackpaw, or even Tanglestar to see her like that.
Tanglestar woke with a jolt. Panting heavily she looked around for Snowberry. She loved him. How could she let him go? Just leave like that. But she was gone. Gone... Would she ever see his pure, fluffy white pelt again, and dazzling eyes? She closed hers and felt a tear roll down her face, weaving between her whiskers. She stifled a breath and lowered her head in shame. What a leader she was. Leaving two apprentices and a deputy alone with a badger in the middle of the forest. She was so mouse brained.
She got her eyes opened enough to notice she was at Fourtrees. How did I get here? She thought. Just then a big hole peopled in the middle of the ground. she narrowed her eyes as she cautiously paced forward to look inside. There was Snowberry. Right there. Back in the forest were they fought the badger together. She looked up to see a starry cat fight on the other side of the hole. It walked slowly toward her. "StarClan?" Tanglestar mumbled. "Starclan?" She said a little bit louder. "I'm... I am dead..." She tried to hold back a few more tears, but was unsuccessful at it. the cat got close enough to were Tanglestar could see it. Firestar The greatest leader and warrior of all time. Here in front of her. "Hello," He purred. Tanglestar couldn't understand why he was so happy, she had just died. She opened her mouth but nothing came out. "Helllloooo?" He tried again. Tanglestar swallowed. She couldn't believe what she said next. "My deputy is out there crying or my dead body with a raging badger still near and two apprentices in a tree and you say, 'hello??'" she bit her lip when she was done. Firestar only flicked his ear. "Excuse me," She purred once again. "Will you return a greeting?" She just stood there again, then had to greet him, if it was for Snowberrys life. "Hello, Firestar. May I ask why I am here? Am I dead?" I asked. Firestar blinked. "You are dead. But only one life." I shuttered. something felt like it was draining from me. I winced as it made me collapse on the ground, and this was sucking all the energy out from me. I lay still on the ground, breathing heavily. Firestar padded closer, flicking his tail as it he was happy to see me in such pain. "You have taken my place as the leader of ThunderClan, and one life has been taken back from you as leader. you are one paw step closer to starclan-" I didn't let him finish. "Send me back now then!" Firestar cleared his throat then started again. "You are one paw step closer to Starclan, and one paw step closer to your clan. You will be sent back as soon as you heal fully. I look forward to seeing you in dreams, young Tanglestar, leader of ThunderClan, the brave and the strong." He slowly dissolved into the open dark air and the stars that were in his pelt flew up into the sky. Tanglestar watched in awe. Her strength was still low, but the sky fadded back onto color, and her eyes closed as wind struck her limp body.
Slowly, she opened her eyes. A cool breeze swept over her and the vision was blurry... A big white blob, who's mouth was moving but she couldn't hear anything. then it cleared. He was saying her name. and it was snowberry. "Snowberry," she mumbled, voice cracking. She was there with him. Finally. Back with him... Her body was sore all over, everything throbbed and hurt badly. she could barley move anything.
She got her eyes opened enough to notice she was at Fourtrees. How did I get here? She thought. Just then a big hole peopled in the middle of the ground. she narrowed her eyes as she cautiously paced forward to look inside. There was Snowberry. Right there. Back in the forest were they fought the badger together. She looked up to see a starry cat fight on the other side of the hole. It walked slowly toward her. "StarClan?" Tanglestar mumbled. "Starclan?" She said a little bit louder. "I'm... I am dead..." She tried to hold back a few more tears, but was unsuccessful at it. the cat got close enough to were Tanglestar could see it. Firestar The greatest leader and warrior of all time. Here in front of her. "Hello," He purred. Tanglestar couldn't understand why he was so happy, she had just died. She opened her mouth but nothing came out. "Helllloooo?" He tried again. Tanglestar swallowed. She couldn't believe what she said next. "My deputy is out there crying or my dead body with a raging badger still near and two apprentices in a tree and you say, 'hello??'" she bit her lip when she was done. Firestar only flicked his ear. "Excuse me," She purred once again. "Will you return a greeting?" She just stood there again, then had to greet him, if it was for Snowberrys life. "Hello, Firestar. May I ask why I am here? Am I dead?" I asked. Firestar blinked. "You are dead. But only one life." I shuttered. something felt like it was draining from me. I winced as it made me collapse on the ground, and this was sucking all the energy out from me. I lay still on the ground, breathing heavily. Firestar padded closer, flicking his tail as it he was happy to see me in such pain. "You have taken my place as the leader of ThunderClan, and one life has been taken back from you as leader. you are one paw step closer to starclan-" I didn't let him finish. "Send me back now then!" Firestar cleared his throat then started again. "You are one paw step closer to Starclan, and one paw step closer to your clan. You will be sent back as soon as you heal fully. I look forward to seeing you in dreams, young Tanglestar, leader of ThunderClan, the brave and the strong." He slowly dissolved into the open dark air and the stars that were in his pelt flew up into the sky. Tanglestar watched in awe. Her strength was still low, but the sky fadded back onto color, and her eyes closed as wind struck her limp body.
Slowly, she opened her eyes. A cool breeze swept over her and the vision was blurry... A big white blob, who's mouth was moving but she couldn't hear anything. then it cleared. He was saying her name. and it was snowberry. "Snowberry," she mumbled, voice cracking. She was there with him. Finally. Back with him... Her body was sore all over, everything throbbed and hurt badly. she could barley move anything.